Quiet Poetry Lounge : sad

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Jun 29, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m sad , and I don’t know why
    I feel something close to my heart
    Slipping further and further away
    Tears form and drop from the corner of my eye
    My heart feels like its going to break
    Any hour now
    Any minute now
    Any second now
    Everyday I dread
    Cause I know the inevitable will come
    But I don’t know what that is
    I know it has something to do with you
    With us
    Your smiles’ not quite as bright
    Your hugs not quite as tight
    Your kisses not quite as……right
    I woke up crying this morning
    With your name on my lips
    And your soul in my heart
    I feel the connection slipping
    The hold losening
    The love
    Dying
    I’m sad , and I don’t know why
    I feel something close to my heart
    Slipping further and further away
    And that something is you
     
  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang Baby Girl

    That was Deep.........and nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O~MY MY MY~~!!!

    APART
    SO FAR
    HEART OF BLUE
    THINKING OF U

    LOOK DEEP WITHIN
    RELAX AND EXHALE
    SMILE COZ HE'S ONLY
    A HALF MILE AWAY
    HE'S COMING HOME ....

    THIS IS SO TOUCHING AND CARE FREE
    I LOVE IT...........................................$R
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wowww, nat, this one hit home. lovin' the flo of this melancholy piece.

    ~~~yourpoetryistherapy~~~
     
  5. KentuckianKween

    KentuckianKween Active Member MEMBER

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    well alright now... two soul snaps for you soul sista... your flow here is impressive... diggin it deep :D