Black Poetry : Sad Sad Tale

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Jun 19, 2006.

  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading while it was posted
     
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    It don't take much to see the saddness engulfed in and around this piece...but that too shall past.
    Very touching piece poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling you here how something seem low yet will turn high
    flow on now !!! express it all..............................................
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU QUEENSWANA AND $$RICH$$ I APPRECIATE THE SUPPORT AND IT IS A HEALING PROCESS AND THE WORDS HELP ME TO GET IT OUT MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    first i like to say hey gurl how you doing. my names nevar and that's pretty much it. and now about your work felt the emotions that you was feeling in this piece. flo on little sis cant wait to read more
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: HEY NEVAR MUCH LOVE I APPREICATE YOUR WORDS AND I AM DOING GOOD I HOPE TO HEAR MORE FROM YOU TOO THANKS AGAIN MUCH LOVE
     
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    That was an excellent piece about adolescence.
    I really enjoyed and to be honest I wished it were longer.
    Great write:tweety: :tweety:
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you cursed i really appreciate the words and the advice thank you girl much love sweettee29
     
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    i liked the rhythm in this poem :welldone:
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKYOU HOWARDTSU IT REALLY MEANS ALOT COMING FROM YOU

    MUCHMUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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