Black Poetry : Sad Love Song

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  1. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    November 25, 1998
    3:49pm


    The sound of your footsteps
    On your way out
    Mixed into a song of pain
    Clouding the ears of my veins
    Stopping the flow of love to my heart
    For I know not
    When I will see you again.

    (c)1998
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside da sadness is a joy
    pure love and a lot more
    within da heart is a smile
    relax dear one it only
    takes a while
    the pain of that stain
    is to be claim
    u will see again
    as lovers a whole new friend

    within da flyte of love i knoweth)))))>>>>
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' this beautiful piece of melancholy. even in it's sadness it's holding it's own beauty. keep on scribin'...i'm watchin'.



    ~~~lovechaptas~~~
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    listerscribin said it all.
    this is absolutely nice.
     
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