Black Poetry : Sacrifices

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A life is given a chance...
    For love and Romance...
    For goals and tribulations...
    For Achievements and Pride at Gratuation...

    We often forget that to receive you must give...
    That to be happy you must live...
    To be free it must be embedded in your mentality...
    But to gain something...to what result could be the fatality.

    In an approach to succeed...
    How many time must you bleed...
    from dispair...
    and brain and muscle repair...
    Sacrifices...at an angle...
    Glanced at but in the distance..
    Slowly coming to an existence
    As you reach for a better you....
    And with that you shall include...

    Sacrifices
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    sha you hype my mental

    when i read your work
    yea can't get no where without sacrifices yo sha check this piece i wrote called "Da Rise and Da Fall"
    it borders on what you wrote and i don't care what nobody say you all that i am a fan of yours. you strong mentally, i like that, so i tend to gravitate towards you because of your strength i feed off of that. you definitely have someone here you loves your works so if we have to will be in this together. i gonna send you a private message shortly. because we need strong soldiers like you, when i say soldiers the last thing you should be thinking of is army, navy, marines or air force, feel me, we are Da Street So'jaz.

    Peace and love Shaneak
    you have MADE me a believer in you

    DSSNY - inside the struggle
     
  3. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Soja!!

    And I would be more than glad you join your forces... and thanks for comps also...I'm a great big fan of yours also...
     
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    Kem....

    You know I'm going to disagree right. :D We asked that the our love is equal to the love given...but many times that is not the case... I've seen where i don't give love and recieve an abundance of it back...and i've also seen time where I've given love and only received appeciation for my affection..but not the same in return... which is why i my quote is their...Accept love as it is given...for love is not made in vain!!! But i must say...I have seen love in many different ways...shapes sizes...emotions...just different...if i could count how many ways love can be received...Its is blessing the word in disquise...
     
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    Sha

    mr. Kem is right

    we are all balls of energy
    so it is important that you continue to project love, don't worry about what somebody else is doing worry about your character, because if you (this is universal law) project love the love comes back to you maybe not in the form you want it in but it comes back, it falls back to the saying "what goes around comes around" so the important thing is not to push negative because you get negative back, same for positive so that's why Mr. Kem is right of sorts. see if you give somebody lets say $200, and you give it from your HEART, you might not get $200 back from that person, it might come from somebody different, it might not be $200, could be more or less, but it comes back in some form or fashion it might come back but not in money.

    we you do things from the heart without your hand out looking for something in return, it will come back to you, it might not come from the person you helped,
    it might not even come from a person but it comes back
    It's the Law of Rhythm
    everything is in motion so with that you have positive and negative energy

    if you stay positive some negativity exists because positive and negative can't exist without each other
    it is important to stay focused and positive so you can make the ration
    something like 90%positive 10%negative
    you like to keep the positive high
    cause once the negative over it attracts negative, and so my point is stay positive and you will attract positive
    i know we went a little deep with the Law of Rhythm but in time you will come to understand. the life we lead keeps us away from universal law , cause we are thought that anything we need is outside of us , money, material, but in actually all you need is within. cause out of all the things you put in hand food is the only one keeping alive


    DSSNY
     
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    Okay Now....

    I can breath... whooo... Thanks Soja and Kem... Your words of wisdom are much needed. And i understand exactly what was said; and couldn't agree more. Postivity is always needed if not within given by to motivate someone... Negativity just likes to tag along for the ride...see whose day they can ruin. ; But i do understand...

    Thanks Guys :D
     
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    Sha'

    ...often- I still want something for nothing...thanks 4 today's reminder lesson...excellent drop Sha'.

    peace
    g-man
     
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    Sha-Sha....


    i'm glad i didn't let this one get by me!!

    Sacrifices... it has given me something to
    think about...

    thank you for sharing this one sis!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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    Thanks

    I'm glad you guys liked this... I tend to write poems of lessons...they guide me through my years....

    Gypsy: sometimes we all expect something for nothing... its just our way of nature.. but if we can remember our reasons for doing something in the first place...the good behind it... maybe our hearts wouldn't be so greedy...


    GA: I'm glad you like it... Me i always need some type of guidance...and most of it has been through my own peotry... I hope it helps you find a better way...
     
  10. keri

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    big ups on this one.....reminds me of what someone once said to me, that being, we sometimes lose our priesthood because we aren't willing to sacrifice
    K.
     
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