Black Poetry : SacreligiouS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by StarGoddess, Mar 28, 2003.

  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **let me first say I mean no offense, as I take my religion seriously...thus the twist**


    I am completly blasphemous...

    Every morning I kneel down
    in front of my dark angel,
    kiss his thighs
    and humm mesmerized,
    trying to surmise the distinct flavor of his skin...
    yeah...I'm living in sin...
    bowing to my prophet
    and treating his words as my laws
    for when he commands me to come...
    I do it...
    when he wants me to stay...
    I do it...
    when he needs something done...
    I do it...
    not because I am forced or asked
    but because I am compeled~~
    some kind of spririt envokes me
    and provokes to abide by his whims,
    for I was nothing before I found him...
    when I was wandering, desolate in my meanderings,
    his voice boomed from his lofty height
    and sweet salvation...the light of his smile
    showed me the way...
    and no longer was I blinded by the empty promises
    of previous devious false prophets
    that had led me down my path of destruction...
    deteriorating my faith in what I knew to be right.
    He forgives me my trespasses...
    baptizing me in the depth of his eyes,
    astounding me with the gentle caress of his kindness
    as I sing benevolent praises for this king
    I revere as most high...
    and every night when I lay with him
    we merge so I become flesh of his flesh,
    engorged by the power I feel in the pulse of his blood,
    his name tumbles from me,
    revered on my lips...
    my only prayer to Heaven.
    May God one day pity me, forgive my blatant hedonism
    and folly in putting my idol before him,
    cause I have backslidden down a razor's blade
    and helplessly wallow obliviously burning
    in the cyanide snare of my sin.

    copyright ambroziya snow 2003
     
  2. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Though the topic is a bit hot for me to touch
    I just wanted to tell you your writing skills
    are on point.
     
  3. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes goddess of da stars, you sure hit it the rite way! I know what u mean. I LOVE this and yo skills!
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know exactly how you feel
    never give up on you
    God bless
     
  5. Moses the Poet

    Moses the Poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ha! Aptly titled...... also very well done!

    This skates along the edges of sensuality and damnation.
    Scorching to the touch....

    Andrew
     
  6. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa

    i seriously didnt expect to get any replies to this one due to the nature....but i'm glad someone got it.....

    glad a few could look past the obvious and read between the lines....

    thank you so much for the love..........

    **humbled**
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    StarGoddess,

    You are definitely from the stars. Never put the pen down.

    blak