Black Poetry : sacred love poetry (for my queen)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...you
    were bathed in the waters of purity
    more pure than artesian water is your skin
    you opened your door to let me six sense your sov(her)eignty

    i enter your queendom

    beholding the clay designed by the Great Potter's hand
    setting her sacred feet into my dry land
    and there i stand in awe for i saw a fulfilment of plan
    when i looked through the windows of your soul which pierced this man

    you epitomize the number 1 for you're all i need
    and 2 for our combined strength
    3 for God is our mediator 4 5 and 6 are the extra familial length
    7 days of the week i am complete with my nfinite 8 love
    which is you

    when you lay all of creation took a view and gave praise to you for it was due
    the earth stood still to honor your timeless being for you and the All- Seeing as you spin on the axis of eternity..

    i call you wisdom for you are wise
    as you guide my imagination to wonder what could be
    and no
    i can not hide my fascination to ponder what would be
    if we were mr. and ms. L.

    tonight we did what was right and know that my every kiss had definition
    and true love is starting to give my heart a fair premonition as i pray to God 2 show us the way

    and
    the commitments we've sown in the night let us reap in the day...
    the love we've sown tonight let us reap in the day
    for the harvest of love is spacious but the laborers are few
    but only this time they both are new
    and meant to be.....


    endless love to poetic delight (Alana)
    jehiah.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    j'hiah

    man the pureity of love within .....i'm love dis !!!!
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    pd

    *speechless*
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$,

    ya know it, $$RICH$$,

    thanx for the read.
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so was i.... :wink:

    nfinitely,
    me.
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this was

    well laid
    no pun
    of course

    you mac you


    D.S.S.
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright brother let her know let her know!!! nice blakman. I'm sure she is crazy digging this.

    blak
     
  8. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was too tiiiiiiiiiite!. Like the way you put it down.
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It always ALWAYS

    warms me to see the expressions of love so beautifully conveyed...I cannot think of any touch as intense or as all-comsuming as soul-deep loving...

    You are blessed, both of you.... as you come and as you go...
    may you treasure each other always...

    FABULOUS!

    a
     
  10. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh, the gardener always knows when the season is right for sowing. May the seeds you plant today reap abountiful harvest of tomorrows...

    I am honored to experience the outpouring today...Poet, love her as no other for the seeds you plant within her heart will last

    ***eternal***

    One.
     
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