Black Poetry : ~~~ Sacrament ~~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Dec 20, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Copyright ©2004 A~Sage
    All rights reserved
     
  2. Leaky103

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    speak, girl!!

    Speak the truth!! Your love is the light, sacrament. Deep proses and I loved everyone.
     
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    As your heart sings, melodies of sacred love fill the empty chamber of want ~
     
  4. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    i want to kiss you
    shadow your jawline
    against touch
    longing to
    kiss you
    scent of your love like
    salt water and seafoam
    clean
    kiss you
    near god
    amongst strangers
    dare either to stop me
    :hearts2:

    want to kiss you
    bitter
    tired of waiting
    wondering
    empty
    want to kiss you
    steady as forever
    small as favor
    kiss you...that
    curve where shoulder
    meets neck
    throat
    chin
    elbow
    wrists
    then rest
    chest
    back
    hip
    belly again

    want to hold you
    entwined with vows
    palm against palm
    fingers laced and waiting
    wish to kiss you
    Unbroken
    Before too many hearts
    Snap like dried and
    Dead things
    Still longing
    Still waiting
    just one,
    small
    solitary
    kiss
    Quiet and quick
    Silent and subtle
    I can only hope that it will
    speak
    volumes

    thank u for that flow your the best i wish i could wrie as u do love ...i feeling this sooo deeply.....hookup :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this leaked out so sweet and warm love the vibe of this here sista
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet awesome flowing my sister keep bringing it nice one enjoyed it and all dat yanno....Angel
     
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    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    how I have waited for a Sage drop.

    My sister, this is beautiful and tender, loving and mysterious - a gorgeous essence throughout. One of the things I adore about your work is it always leaves me nuggets for pondering, long past the reading of the actual piece. I love the way you mine the depths of thought. Thanks for bringing me with you........much love.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't put it any better than gempis. Sis, this read like a love aching to be released so that he can only fathom what he means to you. I'm sure he does. Making me smile poet....:)
     
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    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew, i'm truly blown away by this scribe Queen. honestly, i don't have the words to describe it. beautiful

    Lyr1c
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the poetic tapestry tounged in this treasure is too much...
    this was truly beautiful...do dat thang...yeah!!!
    one love
    khasm
     
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