Black Poetry : S.O.S

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GYPSYMAN, Aug 23, 2001.

  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~I sit in a room
    with
    no doors...
    ~on a sea
    with no...
    ~sign of land-fall...

    ~I am tapping
    on the stucco
    in secret
    staccatto
    symphony...
    ~I am
    slapping the
    surface of
    still waters...

    ~sending signals
    ~~seeking signs
    ~~~cyphering riddles
    ~~~~deciphering my own mind

    ~my own concious thoughts
    caught in the
    middle of
    fantastic
    fantasy
    my wishful
    soul
    holds
    daily
    lotteries....
    -and-
    I'm trying to

    ~stack the deck
    ~~load the dice
    ~~~find that spot
    where my
    Mag(mind)net
    will
    ~lock

    her tumbling
    soul
    in place..

    with mine.

    ~time after time
    ~~day after day

    in every single

    way..

    Dot . Dot . Dash - Dot . Dot . Dash -

    . . - . . -. . - . . - . . -

    I long to
    ~tear down
    these walls
    I seek a
    ~certain island
    under a distant
    "smile" of stars..

    ~so I continue
    to navigate
    unchartered....
    ~currents
    swimming
    towards/through
    ~a soul

    her

    soul...

    ~perhaps...

    I see a glow...


    ...beneath the floor...



    ~on the horizon.





    On A Continuous Journey
    Gypsyman
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Swim no further - don't drown on a tablespoon of ciphered riddles that have no rhyme or reason.... just "be" ...

    Just

    Be ...

    a social drinker

    sipping smooth

    blush
    wi
    ne

    functional
    alco/word/holic
    of mine

    guzzling
    lines
    of crushed ice
    with flavored
    cherries on top
    covering the
    alphabet
    in my mind

    Just Be

    Just

    be

    ... that ... as ... it ... may ~



    :kiss: YOU ALREADY KNOW THE DEAL :wink:
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy,

    This is like that bro!!!!

    Thorough piece man!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  4. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I will follow your advice....and ...........BE

    MUCH:heart:
    G-MAN
     
  5. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CINDY...GQ

    cINDY-THANKS FOR YOUR GOOD WISHES...THANKS 4 THE READ.
    PEACE

    GQ-APPRECIATE THE WORDS OF PRAISE MY BRO.
    THAS PEACE

    G-MAN
     
  6. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So glad that you are "GYPSY"....so that we may follow your wondering soul's verse...

    Such an eloquently written piece....it floats

    *lost-at-see*

    :wave: :wave: