Quiet Poetry Lounge : S.O.S (substance or style)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, May 18, 2008.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i’ve written her so many poems to get her to appreciate my Vince-Sanity

    does she store them in her “vanity”

    do I bore her with my sanity?

    at her core am I her manatee?

    is it décor that Christianity teaches that all things are possible

    when my popcicle thinks my humanity

    is missing?



    love,

    howard
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How can she not appreciate your substance, when you have such staying power howard?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow....bruh s.o.s ...she can't turn away from the style where u display such substance
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maybe it's not S.O.S.....Maybe you have the S.A.S. Factor:) Maybe she is nervous....
    Great Flow
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maybe she is

    thanks platinumillity1 :wave:



    thanks $$rich$$ :em3600:


    exactly :em2300:

    thanks watzinaname
     
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    most welcome
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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