Black Poetry : S~o~a~k~e~d

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, May 16, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want (no I need) a cool shower

    The night before had me filled with

    a forgone conclusion that there was

    going to be many many more nights

    like this; you know the kind where

    I'm soaked down there and right here

    and just about everywhere in you

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Pleasure so defined yet mysteriously

    hidden drank of my carnal appetite;

    a whetting I'd surely savor if I could

    just control this drenching condensation

    that's you; it's all over everywhere, a

    little right here and a lot more right there

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Whoa! Be careful not to wipe that sensual

    marinated juice that permeates oh so well

    It serves a purpose when I get down there;

    then I'm sure to enjoy it everywhere when it

    drips slowly down here right between the

    clefts of your saturated and sexy mind

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    Mmmm…I see I have you slowly and gently

    seeping the me out of you; such a similarity of same

    You trickle out and I absorb in-soaking up

    all of your affection as you tease me with

    your wetness and douse me with your nectar

    I am inclined to soak you in my own liquidity

    here, there, and everywhere…

    but

    for

    now

    I'll enjoy my private bath in your soaking wet

    flow…

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    I AM SO "S~O~A~K~E~D" N U...
    :cool:
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wwwwwwhhhhhhhhhooooaaa!

    And I need a sponge to absorb ur flow....!!

    Mmmm Mmmm Mmmm :hot: :hot: :hot:


    Where ya' been daddy?! Well, that don't matter
    cause you're back N Da House now!


    :heart:
     
  3. Destee

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    uuuhhhhhhh GQ ... uuuhhhhhhhhh

    this is a very wet peace

    hehehe

    luv it !!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. Afridancr

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    Oh yeah G...

    WET INDEED!!! OH IF YOU ONLY KNEW! :laugh:
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gq,

    Mr. Love Jones please step up!!! Put it down brother put it in writing the way it needs to be put...**** all that...man, make 'em sweat!!! :hot:

    your ace in scribe, blak
     
  6. MapleXtract

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    Ummmm...

    ...I like this one a whole lot, yup; but I won't 'say', exactly, what it did to me, though (some things you, just, gotta leave to the imagination, you know?). But, yeah, I'm diggin' this one, for real...:D :D :D :jumping: :rolling:
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WE ARE NOT WORTHY!!!! WE ARE NOT WORTHY!!!!

    GQ, you keep bringing da heat up in here...well keep it up cuz imma taking notes...
     
  8. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I gota go with dnommo on this on "WE are NOT Worthy"

    tight scribe poet
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    I'm packing my bags hell I don't need these clothes and Imma meet yo *** in Jersey by the shore. We gettin hitched for real now. Who got my **** towel?????
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks All!!!!

    :toast: Here's to ya - keep it nice~n~wet!!!!

    Peace
    GQ