Black Poetry : S.I.N.F.U.L

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 14, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the stars frown
    when they see the
    earth

    i drown in tears
    that stain my pillow
    i look at the news and
    all i see is catastrophes

    horrible insanitys.
    melancholy vainites
    sex-u-(all) sins-u-all (sensual)
    EVERYTHING :eeek:

    one question:WHAT IS WRONG WITH THE WORLD?



    ME-IS-CONFUSED,
    conduct misused,
    bout to burn my fuse!!!:censored:

    got me singin the blu's

    drugs fed
    hearts bled
    from bullets that
    sped from miles
    searchin to take
    souls

    from the earth
    and throw them in
    hell holes

    roots disconnected
    muziq industry IN-fected
    GOD in school REGECTED

    sdrowkacb (backwords)
    sin against kin
    cheatin to win....

    we gots to make straight the
    world we live in.





    dis is from ya still venting, poetic GODDESS,hope u enjoy!
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see that the writer's block is gone. Keep em coming
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes it is thank God. and yes i will keep them comin alizen,dont worry!!
    thanks for replin
    peace
    -story
     
  4. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Gurll! you arent lying. this world has gone MADDD. love this piece!
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it has fasho, and we need to do some thing about it,
    i am so sick of sex,drugs and who knows what else,
    is in this world today we need to do something about it,
    thanks for comin through. :D

    much love
    story
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    d*mn girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is great!!
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u lovelygoldenone
    appriciate u droppin bye