Black Poetry : S!cK

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by KaNvaZ, Oct 21, 2005.

  1. KaNvaZ

    KaNvaZ Member MEMBER

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    I’m sick
    I’m sick of everything
    I’m sick of people always harrassing me
    I’m sick of five-oh always stopping me
    I’m sick of you asking me how much I had to drink even though I’m completely sober
    I’m sick of you shining your light in my car’s interior searching for a collar
    I’m sick of the color blue
    I’m sick of seeing a black and white every time I look in my rearview
    I’m sick of this ***** following me around with his hand on the radio
    I’m sick of you waiting for me to make one wrong move while I adjust my stereo
    I’m sick of this hick town always staring at me
    I’m sick of people profiling me because I like to wear a hoodie
    I’m sick of you cuffing me because you got a badge and a gun
    I’m sick of you calling back-up on my *** because I’m the only one who’s brown in this town
    I’m sick of these kracker mothafuckaz always giving me a hard time
    I’m sick of these ***** *** foolz getting in my business from five to nine
    I’m sick of you looking at me and automatically presuming that I commit crimez
    I’m sick of not seeing enough blue uniforms without a chalk outline
    I’m sick of everyone giving me verbal tongue lashes
    I’m sick of ignorant foolz still calling the “The Greatest” Cassius
    I’m sick of not seeing enough black-and-white crashes
    I’m sick of not seeing enough PD buildings burned down to ashes
    I’m sick of my boss always on me
    I’m sick of his cronies and his **** hypocrisy
    I’m sick of him criticizing me on my productivity
    I’m sick of him saying I don’t do enough while he picks out his golf tees
    I’m sick of not making sufficient funds
    I’m sick of having heartburn with no money for Tums
    I’m sick of my office always giving the promotion to a guy named “John”
    I’m sick of bill collectors calling me, making me think of gunz
    I’m sick of the bull**** so prevalent in society
    I’m sick of this redneck state making an example of me
    I’m sick of hick b!tchez talking about me, broadcasting my life like a litany
    I’m sick of misdemeanors being up to a felony
    I’m sick of all this injustice
    I’m sick of how minorities are treated
    I’m sick of my brothers and sisters indited
    I’m sick of you honky mothafuckaz and your system!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep yet felt i'm sick too and ready to make a move
    this was tyte strong as any song u laid it out venting
    i'm sick , but no need to blast cuss or fuss just drop
    them on there A...... and pass the peas please !

    nice write
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel the fustration i'm sick and tired of being sick and tired.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well expressed vent, it's ashame that most of us can sing a similiar song, but you sang it so well. This was definitely an attention grabber poet.
     
  5. KaNvaZ

    KaNvaZ Member MEMBER

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    thank you family....this place is rapidly becoming more than just a website for me....this place is almost like my personal theraphy.

    thanks again.