Black Poetry : Rythum of the Breeze

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  1. Athena Marie

    Athena Marie New Member MEMBER

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    From shadows of a willow tree, I focus on dancing sun clothed figures
    So captivated in a halcyon state, they forget the shadows
    Passing through pages of philosophy
    Hoping eyes will glance my way
    A gentle breeze is the director of an exotic ballet
    leafs dance nimbly to a single rhythm
    Curiosity drips from my pours, like water off a petal in a thunder
    storm
    The theater the sun gives and every actor is idealized by the eyes
    behind the shadows
    Reaching out with a lonely finger I brush past the shadows
    Dancing in the burning sun, I have lost my mind to the rhythm of the
    breeze
    Sweat soaks my soul, but my heart turns cold
    Tripping out the steps to turns and twists
    Demand such precision and concentration when important pupils have
    expectations
    Oh the chore dancing has become
    Longing for rest, I gaze upon my shadowed willow tree
    To see two intense eyes staring back at me
    I think to whisper to the naive eyes
    Read philosophy and forget the sun, forget me
    For I am lost to the rhythm of the breeze
     
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    Hi Athena Marie
    It is a wonderful thing to be a part of
    our natural surrounding and become one
    with the Rythum Breeze.

    Wow! I enjoyed this flow deeply.
    The tone the beat the message and the feeling

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this journey ride had my eyez poppin from da breeze rythummmmm!!
     
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    Gee, this was chock full of earthy imagery, oh to be one with nature this way. Awesome write.
     
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    Wonderful!! It speaks upon beautiful possibilities and the very essence of connecting with nature and journeying through life. What a beautiful reflection of nature you are.

    Peace, love & light embrace U & yours!!
     
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