Black Poetry : Ryhme Scheme & Bars (Just F.Y.I.)

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Please Read 4 Whoever Finds This Helpful
these are bars the / lets u know its the ens of that bar
the ryhme scheme is simple to read not complex
but it gives you an idea of basic ryhming and bar break down
uno


My words flow like rivers brush off banks
Im always full never running on empty tanks/
My words bridge the gap kick haters off planks
Drown your hatred like white boys and titanic sank/
Im gone off that wild rose and plenty of dank
My hood call it hydro-I call it that crank/
And this aint april fools-fool you get pranked
Walking that green mile and I aint talking tom hanks/

 

[$$RICH$$]

Da anks was smooth
like bustin a groove
dat had me all move
this was really cool

 

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thanks $$rich$$
just trying to explain to people
a basic breakdown of how you can diversify

example

1.poetry flows but his/he-sit son (hesitation) got him scared of the world

2.funny shaped like a pear one L short of having a pearl

see what i mean
thanks for the love again rich

 

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we need to have a rule for real
and i will say it again if u want more replies
show more love to other poets
not just posting on one and then posting ur either
i think cats should respond to poets all the time
thats another poetry f.y.i.

 

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f.y.i.
poets we should all do a mass poetry colab one day
we should pick a topic and do it that way
and also we should have a poetry contest
we have enough poets this shouldnt take long to do
what do u all think