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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jul 8, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its funny how you say…
    I turn your life around
    How you say you love me
    And you run…
    Scared of what you feel
    But speak it so well….

    Its funny how I made meaning in your life…
    So you say….
    That I am that Princess Butterfly
    You want to hold and love
    Mend and heal
    But you run
    Do you know you have me….
    In the hush of the night
    Do you know I think of you
    Feel your fears hear your doubts
    As tears run because
    All I ever did was wish for you
    But I guess you’re scared…
    Words are few
    Time is here
    And you’re running once more…
    Is it because you dont love me anymore
    Or is it just fears and doubts
    Because my Prince
    I LOVE YOU!!!!!
    I AM
    HERE BY YOUR SIDE
    TO STAY!!!!!!

    (C) 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very touching scribe one's heart can't help but feel da true love
    within dis dip ! flow on sistah tyte
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emotional piece, lovingly written.
     
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    Beautifully moving peace...
     
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    I feel you immensely, sister. Much love for this scribe.
     
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    this one tugged at my :heart: string

    this was wonderfully written and he's a d*mn fool if he keep running;)
     
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    Angel, we all move in our own (safe mode) way and with our own natural sway...meaning there's no doubt there about the divine love that's held between the two..."Forever" is some heavy stuff. It's usually no biggie for us warrior women, but (most) men go through the "running away" stage, but that's no biggie either because they don't go nowhere as well.
    Chess is real life game...with this piece, you just made a 'black move'...just sit back and relax cause...it's his 'move. and when the game is in the crusial middle, ...both moves, "the black king and the black queen will end up...In the same castle.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$..thank you for the loving support as always...

    watzinaname :thanks:

    angelicsage :thanks:

    gempis..glad you enjoyed this poem....thanks for the love and support as always

    7thPoet..thank you...:lol: he maybe but i doubt a fool we all been hurt before and the fear always there...glad you enjoyed the scribe...

    queentswana..so true..thanks for your input....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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