Black Poetry : runnin'

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord I'm runnin'
    cannot seem to find time to
    count up all my blessings or
    much of anything
    down some lonely
    roads I knows I had to go
    down to the depths of oh
    anything

    well she hates me but she
    wants me more more more
    she be callin that love
    and Iyiyi
    oh I don't mind anymore m m more more more
    anyway she'll say anything
    at any given time
    and I'm inclined to believe
    nothing

    know I'm payin'
    for many a mistake and give
    heartaches and breaks I did
    long long long ago
    check my watch to
    maybe just to count the days
    to years and let 'em tick away
    to long L L long long ago

    so ready to lay in that bed we made
    oh forever more more more
    and now Iyiyiyi
    oh I just don't know anymore m m more more more
    anyway she'll shed many tears
    at any given time
    and I'm inclined to feel
    almost nothing

    (c)90 som'n/Michael
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deeply emotional piece, great flow here.
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Angelicsage.
    but it really ain't all that deep.
    more of a cold aftermath
    type thing...
    A big thanx for your kind words tho:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt this one within u said it in da deep emotional flow
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Rich. They say the writer writes
    into the poem
    and the reader reads into the poem.
    ok they don't say that... lol
    but they should.
    Peace brah
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i was doing just that !
    reading into it
    the aftermath of dis was heartfelt emotions
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the flow of this.
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Rich haha I soulsearched and actually
    did find some deep and profound feelings
    but I won't say what kind tho. Thanx
    for the journey into greater truth.
    Peace to my brotha.

    Thanx Rico.
    Peace to ya brah
     
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    wow..this so emotional..feeling it more and more...nice flow
    Peace
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Bluewater. I'm glad you are feelin' me.
    Peace and love to ya