Black Poetry : RUN - A -WAY slave ..... entangled the web we weave

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by herlove, Feb 2, 2004.

  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is it not enough that we struggle to raise children ON OUR OWN
    countless seeds sown cast to the winds blown astray
    contradictory is every **** word u say
    yet a gesture of remorse grants you pleasure of yesterdays : Forgiveness i dare not ponder
    in the resonance of ones mind i feed off its carcusas; engulfed the stinch of rotten flesh that once appeared alive vividly in my mind " thoughts of contemptment and rest "
    sooooooooooo many times u pushed me to the TEST
    wrapped tightly to a slow suffocation of your warped perception of loving me ???? obscurities of pictures once dipicted along the angles that circumference an embodied emptiness that i once thought to be his face
    only now i see the sinister beast that beat senselessly ....
    measurement of hope that i intrusive held hostage optimistically praying hope would fill the emptyness after years of antagonize heartbreaks

    piece unfinished

    dedicate to my sister's abused especially to u jb
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this poem just really got me...i found myself lost inside of it really. a sad but wonderful masterpiece. much love to you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this struggle piece u pose is deeper then one may know
    keep flowin
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was well written
    and deeply moving..
    sad but excellent piece
     
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    Emotively written, feeling this sadness.
     
  6. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks destee fam. .... this piece was venting 4 not just me but 4 my sister ( co workers ) who just this past weekend was abused by and ex. unlike my sister i was lucky and only had harrasing not the actual abuse..... it ticks me off the way this system refuse to protect or hear you out untile someone is hurt badly in this type of situation...THERE IS SIMPLY NO PROTECTION FROM THE LAW 4 WOMEN IN ABUSIVE RELATIONSHIP
     
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