Black Poetry : Ruled By My Shell

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MyTlita, Oct 21, 2009.

  1. MyTlita

    MyTlita Active Member MEMBER

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    You are bolder than me
     
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    Oh, this is fabulous! I love piece that evoke memories for me or that touch my heart.....This does both!

    I had a friend in h.s. like this poem. She was a wild child in her teens and early 20s. She'd do stuff that scared me for her! Yes, she finally settled down. She became a Nurse, been married almost 25 years now, with 4 children and a first grandchild on the way.

    Like this poem, I sometimes admired her spunk and boldness, but I worried about her too.

    (Lawd knows, She did some crazystuff back in tha day!)

    Hopefully, this person will settle down too.


    WONDERFUL PIECE! :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Awesome piece you scribe....... 5 up
     
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    Hello MyTlita...

    I could soul relate to this deeply. It amazes me when someone can write you thoughts. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt piece.


    feelin'itsouldeep!
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    karma55 Active Member MEMBER

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    Great piece.. Definitely feel it!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, i too really like this piece. very nicely written. thank you for giving me the opportunity to read it. keep it going...i'm lovin' it!
     
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