Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MyTlita, Oct 21, 2009.
You are bolder than me
Oh, this is fabulous! I love piece that evoke memories for me or that touch my heart.....This does both!
I had a friend in h.s. like this poem. She was a wild child in her teens and early 20s. She'd do stuff that scared me for her! Yes, she finally settled down. She became a Nurse, been married almost 25 years now, with 4 children and a first grandchild on the way.
Like this poem, I sometimes admired her spunk and boldness, but I worried about her too.
(Lawd knows, She did some crazystuff back in tha day!)
Hopefully, this person will settle down too.
Awesome piece you scribe....... 5 up
I could soul relate to this deeply. It amazes me when someone can write you thoughts. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt piece.
Great piece.. Definitely feel it!
yes, i too really like this piece. very nicely written. thank you for giving me the opportunity to read it. keep it going...i'm lovin' it!
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