Black Poetry : rude awakening

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~an old favorite~ :D

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    feminine hands softly palpate smooth
    broad shoulders, and glide slowly
    down firm, muscled arms, misting
    with body dew ~
    and fingers-in-fingers, closing
    one by one, intertwining
    strong-to-soft digitalia into the warm, moist grip
    of love
    knuckles lose their coloring ever so slightly
    as passion’s fire builds everywhere, between/throughout
    extemities ~
    steam from bodies rise as fingers meld together to
    become
    one hand ~
    the
    metamorphosis reaches
    its apex,
    with no way to tell the beginning/middle/ending
    of pulsating, yet sated flesh

    &
    I wake up and wonder if she touches you that way...


    A, 2000
     
  2. Bishop

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    OOOOOHHHHHH!!!! Alyce!!!! girl you know I like it when you write like this....
     
  3. henryx40

    henryx40 Member MEMBER

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    only you

    she don't know how you touch me
    she has no clue
    that things you do to me
    behind closed doors
    inside daydreams
    where things aren't as they seem

    she don't know your in my mind
    day and night
    angles taking flight
    or is it i who fly on wings
    in the sex joy fantasy you bring

    only you know how to touch me
    like that and this and ohhhh ****
    don't awake
    keep touching me
    cause she don't know
     
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    Alyce Gurl you had my fingers all moving & stuff ...
    dancing to this peace

    go 'head Gurl!!!

    very nice!

    :)

    Destee
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always

    This why IO love to read you--I always feel like I am there--no matter what it is--you bring the reader right into the scene and make them a part of it--that's good writing--strong--Ra ;)

    drop past my colum, I'm talking about lesbians today--Ra :spinstar:
     
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    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce with a smooth twist..... go Miss Mama! Very thought provoking... been here.

    SWT
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce.


    ...a rude awakenin', indeed!! :)

    but! as always... i'm diggin' that thang you do
    wit words. fantastic is the imagery in this one!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  8. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no...no one else touches me this way...

    BRB
     
  9. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Hot!!

    Question
    Was that a dream or Nightmare?
    Very Nice Scribing Poet!!
     
  10. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well...

    Now that I saw the title again, I see it was a rude awakening!!
    Nice!!:)
     
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