Black Poetry : Rounded Out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jun 16, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ROUNDED OUT
    ooooooooooooo

    NBA, NFL
    Golf and Tiger
    Go to hell
    Sport
    Ain't
    What
    I'm
    All
    About,
    Poet, please...
    Shut your mouth!

    Iron Mike,
    He ain't right
    Women fight
    And they don't bite
    Quick to quip,
    Hired lips ~
    Know the score-
    But they too hip

    Baseball,
    Is the game of life
    Stealing home,
    Don't beat the wife
    Bad Jim Brown,
    Leaves little doubt
    There's a man...
    Rounded out


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) LoL I dunno if this was the reaction you wanted but I laughed at this because I like the way you put it down this is a tyte piece I'm just glad to be blessed to have read it
     
  3. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was slammin...Baseball you say????? Try some football, soccer now that is tyte!!!


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poetic sports flow
    it's poetry u know
    slammin vibes
    tyte scribes
    dis da sports
    one should see
    get hits
    night after night
    poetically never fight
    score points
    here & their
    wordz speak
    to make u weak
    dis da game to play !!!

    loved how u drop dis here ....
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LoL

    Honestly Tweets, I was LoL as I wrote it. We are of like minds. Thanks!


    :love:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dream Weaver, Good Day! Happy to see you again. So I'll concede that football, mates, is the world game!

    Much love-
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HIS RICHNESS

    RICH, I love what you say
    And the way that you say it! PEACE
     
  8. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1Poet, :wave:

    You got me laughing out loud at 6 in the morning!! Now my neighbors think I'm nuts!! :lol:

    I love this!! Great read, 1Poet!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Laughter is good for you Sierra, so what's the problem? Thanks, and have a wonderful day!
     
  10. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    now look what you went and did! Got everybody laughing and smilin up in here! I loved it! keep on doing that thang you do!
    lol! (smiles)
     
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