Black Poetry : round we go

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    round and round we go….
    You don’t do this nor that….
    As the day grows shorter…
    The way you love…..
    Just stop in a hush…
    As I lay myself to sleep
    Do you know….
    Can you feel
    I cry as I close my eyez
    Wish for a better tomorrow
    with you…
    pray in the morning
    pray in da noon
    and pray all night
    funny how times fly……
    do you know
    where every you go
    I want to go
    The dream you have…
    Do you know I dream it too…..
    Round and round we go…
    Settin my soul on fire
    Cant wait for the first time…
    As I look in your eyes…
    I feel your touch as I see your soul
    Will you ever know….
    Or have I just lost in this silly
    Game called love….
    Use to have your attention
    Givin me all your affection….
    So round and round we go….
    In a poetic style……I give you
    my emotions..
    Of whole….comin
    from my heart…..
    where do we go from here....

    blkangel thang....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice scribe poetess
    da emotions flowing here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin this emotionally deep piece.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz rich...glad you likes...Angel
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love is a lot like the weather...
    simply unpredictable
    emotive flow
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you sis for da love...
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed it is...thankz sage...for da read...much love n
    HAPPY NEW YEARS....Angel
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uhmmmmmmmmmmmmmhmmmmmmmmmm!

    Yes sister..."WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE?"
    TYTE WRITE!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :smokin:
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa my girl, this is tight and deep. love the way you spun this. much love, sis
     
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