Black Poetry : Rough Sex

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here we go again
    This Rollercoaster Ride
    Im tuggin, she's pullin
    Bodies collide!

    Stop! NO!
    This shouldn't be happening
    Another accident we'll cause
    The results could be tragic!

    But what if I cant stop?
    The force is too strong
    Your grinding!
    That cute little thong

    Im caught up in the rapture
    The rush of this ride
    Ill pump my breaks and try not to slide
    **** that didn't work.......So now Im inside!

    Here we go again
    We're at tip top speed
    Up and Down , Up and Down
    As we proceed!

    As we enjoy the ride we start to make sounds
    Screams of excitement
    We're yelping like hounnds
    Passionate moans as we go around

    One more time! One more time!
    So we can reach our peak
    YES!!!!! She's climaxed
    As I continue to squeek!

    The rides finally over
    I wonder whats next?
    As were exiting the ride I see a sign
    ROUGH SEX!!
     
  2. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whooohooo!!!!
    Where is the line for that ride?????? :lips: :lips: :smokin: :smokin:
    Way to go.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da rough riders
    dis was hottttttttttttttttt!!!!
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sounded like tugging on ropes to me lol good write like the flow
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maaaaan!!

    This was tyte...ruff sex huh...I hear ya...
    This was hot

    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's how it is sometimes...lol. This was a creatively spicy drop.
     
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    nice concept son...
    rollin on rollacoasters
    with the sex shooter out da holster
    one love
    khasm
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so cute... :lol:
    you captured all the emotion and motion...
    of actually being on a roller coaster
    and strategically...placed it in
    this steamy flow of poetry...

    .....Your score is an overwhelming *10*


    Loved it...
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** that was one hell of a journey, dig that!
     
  10. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks thnks thnks
     
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