Black Poetry : Rose In Bloom

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I
    know
    all things aren’t
    possible, but the slightest
    possibility of us
    sends me


    May I
    crash your dreams
    and create scenes that have you
    yearning for me in the
    morning

    because…

    I
    ache
    sweetly with
    anticipation of you and I
    becoming an item

    and…

    my
    stem fancy
    bending toward your will
    while my petals open w i d e to the warmth
    Of your caress

    I
    your
    rose

    in
    FULL
    B L O O M

    intense
    thoughts of you
    are addictive

    they...
    course
    through me like
    morphine sustaining me daily in
    intimate places where I breathe the scent of us spent
    and soak in after-love-glow

    I
    Your
    rose
    ready
    for
    the
    plucking
    :wink:

    Copyright©2008cj
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved the imagery here, I almost saw that flower leaning toward love. Wow.
     
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    i agree with watz flo on sista!
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    cocobutterskyn,

    Rose In Bloom................Simply Beautiful!


    I
    Your
    rose

    ready
    for
    the
    plucking

    :wink:

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mmmmmm!!
    i love a beautiful rose in full bloom
    allow me to pluck away ....awesome scribing
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    interesting

    very visual

    hmmmm i'm thinking this reminds of a piece you wrote involving a hand
    i can't remember the exact title though lol

    your work touches me

    as it always has

    (don't even go there and ask touch me where ahahahahahahahahhhahha)
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, I have missed you! :)

    Clyde, Wondeful of you to come through. Glad you enjoy the read!

    Watz & Nevar, Your sistahly love is very much appreciated!


    Be Blessed!
     
  8. mizjoice

    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice, Sister. The poem itself looks like a bouquet....nice image.
     
  9. LovesDestiny

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    I loved it! And as I read and enjoyed this piece...I could only think how awesome this would be in spoken word!!!!

    Excellent Sis Coco!
     
  10. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with all the posters, especially LovesDestiny
    This would sound great in spoken word
    Wonderful job
     
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