Black Poetry : Rose Haze

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 31, 2008.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I stepped into a rose haze
    Everything in sight had a hint of red
    Felt like I had on rose colored glasses
    But these images were real instead

    I stepped into a rose fog
    A misty mellow morning
    I felt my life was about to take a
    turn, and I had no prior warning

    I don't know what happened to the stratosphere
    the sun appeared golden as always
    There were a few rose tinged clouds
    but they didn't seem to effect the sun's rays

    Was the sky emitting pastel sweetness?
    In that moment I just wanted to bathe in that red wine
    Immerse myself in this eerie invigorating energy
    wondering if this must be some kind of sign

    Oh the warmth that briefly filled me
    on the edge of impending...whatever
    I've seen fog, mists, and a haze of humidity
    before, but a rose tinted morning? Never

    I believe that somehow
    This is the beginning of a change
    a step into the future
    No matter how obtuse or strange

    I stepped into a rose haze...
     
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    What Dreams May Come

    What a beautiful poem. This paints a picture with a rosy outcome in the midst of uncertainty. As always, Watz, your analytic assesment of all that you comprehend comes through in winning fashion. :hearts2:
     
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    a place i wanna be wit thee , this was so beautiful and warm wow !!!
     
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    With eyes wide open, take in the new image with absolute happiness. Red usually means caution, stop, but this one yells GO! Do ur thing.
     
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    Hi Sister Watz
    What a wonderful poem sis. Very peaceful
    with in the moment to bathe in the mist of the roase haze.
    Very relaxing flow sis.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    1poet, you have a knack for critiquing a flow so that it shines. Thanks a million borther.
    Perhaps you somehow caught a glimpse of that morning warmth Rich. That would've been nice, thank you.
    Yes, this red was something to be embraced PositiveMindset, thank you very much.
    Glad you felt the ease of this flow Bluewater, much appreciated.
     
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    wow sis

    and the avatar speaks to me...

    very very very beautiful.............
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister this was so Peaceful and Flowing
    The next step in to life is wonderful
    Not looking back
    Only interested in where you should be
    Flow on!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As beautiful as that avatar is, I got the chance to actuall witness a hint of this vision. Thank you so much Miss Lady.
    Yes, got to keep looking ahead at the beauty that lies before us, thank you Platinum.
     
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