Black Poetry : Rosa P. 2002

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  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i gaze down at my stub
    between my poita and thumb, my stimulus
    numbs as i read
    "33B"

    thinking life will be better from (fake) resolutions
    for the new 365 to come
    that will vanish in 2 weeks and be forever gone
    exposed to (R)evolutions
    but forced to remember new tricks taught to this
    old dawg by crooked institutions
    steadliy hangin my psyche out to dry
    upon clothes lines of that "seperatebutequal" lie
    and seats filled with sepret-but-ekwel
    folks that don't match the die in my skin.makin
    my way down the isle
    "single file" i hear somebody scream
    to row 29
    30
    31
    32
    33
    B

    needless to say near the rear of the plane
    switched vehicles, but the logic still the same.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i got one word for this piece heyah, dear friend...tyght! i am really lovin' the way this piece floats. keep on scribin', i like what i see heyah, fo sho.
     
  3. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    lady.
    keep readin'.

    oneluv
    hw
     
  4. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lister...

    din mean to be so brief, but caught up
    in paperpushin. thanx for OVAstandin
    the meanin of my words.

    hopefully you'll keep readin me.

    peace
    hw
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bring da house down

    coz dis one flowed so free
    tyght scribe as u know already :)
     
  6. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not quite ready

    to bring the house down yet........
    but keep pickin up bricks,
    cuz it's comin soon.

    preeshat the luv.


    much.....

    hw
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte flo!

    I'm feel'n dis piece bru!
     
  8. poeticdelight

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    alright hiwa

    say that

    pd ;)

    peace
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this still happens

    even to a paying customer
    sad sad sad

    DSSNY
     
  10. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true...

    i'm glad u feel. ds.
     
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