Black Poetry : Romantic Magic

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  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Romantic Magic

    Its magical how romance completely overtakes one
    You lose your mind, all your logical abilities
    The wisdom of experience goes by the wayside
    And, for a while, silly becomes your middle name.
    The object of your obsession, err-ruh, affection
    In the beginning, is the perfect one;
    There has never been before and will never be again
    Anyone as supremely suited for you than this
    Joy to your life, light you up with their smile,
    Worship the ground that they walk on
    Focus of your ardent desire.
    Its mystical how romance takes over one so neatly
    Causes you to want to cleve to them completely
    There are no rules and there is no center
    The walls fall down for the world to enter
    We lose sight of the future, forget about the past
    All that really matters is how long will this feeling last.
    Consumed with a lust to possess
    Every bit of life they express
    Every breath they exhude
    Every beautiful mood
    Is captured with such a smooth attitude.
    For a moment your existance is heaven on earth
    Just letting them go is like giving them birth
    The days streak by like a meteor shower
    Every second without them feels like an hour
    Their return re-ignites your intense desire
    The burning within much hotter than fire
    Only their touch can abate this inferno
    That some suspect has raged eternal.
    So desparately some seek for romantic success
    Causing many to get lost in this love wilderness
    Its mysterical how romance comsumes so completely
    Overtaking your senses, blinding your mind
    Leaving you fuller and older and wiser
    Leaving you hoping for a brand new day.

    --©2/13/06--

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  2. nevar

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    wow this is so good oldsoul. this type of love your describing. i enjoyed it all to the last drop flo on poet.:love:
     
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    What's mysterical is...

    Silly still wears my middle name
    my desire for romance is still the same
    we see no wrong or right in this game
    we have no fingers ------> pointing blame
    just yearning to keep our hearts aflame

    Never wanting to leave that "Heaven on Earth"
    counting the moments ...to then give re-birth

    Drawn in by your love and affection...
    my mind done lost all arms of protection

    Yeah, that is the magic of romance
    we all dive in and take that chance!
     
  4. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that s some old school loving right here..Nice drop!:weights:
     
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    This just have you start feelin' thiings
    about romance and magic.
    i love yr wordplay on this.
     
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    man oldsoul this was too sweet the magic of romance
    make ya wanna just live in the space ........................
     
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    Oldschool set trends
    Loving making no doubt
    That was a tight piece poet
    Much Love to you
     
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    Yes love can sometimes make a soul lose all sense of time and space, and... just lose all common sense in general. I still say it's a chance worth taking. Always enjoy an oldsoul piece.
     
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    Thumbs Up......

    A very sweet and tyte drop OldSoul...:rolling:
     
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