Black Poetry : Romancing You Again

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Romancing you again
    enticing you into love's lair
    I draw a lavender perfumed bath
    for you, and strip your inhibitions bare
    Climbing into this aromatic pool,
    I struggle in vain not to stare
    As your caramel skin becomes submerged,
    you relax as the water takes you there
    sans care...
    I romance you again, as I read you
    sonnets that I have yet to share
    with another living soul, for my words are your
    words, speaking of the one heart that we bear.
    I gently cleanse your body, slowly lathering
    every inch, then proceed to wash your hair.
    Closing your eyes while I massage and rinse your
    scalp, you sigh and say nothing can quite compare
    to romancing you again. As we share a kiss,
    mesmerized am I that I'm taken quite unaware
    by the playful tug that sends me splashing into
    that tub right with you. What a zany pair
    we are, laughing, frolicking, then resuming
    that kiss, that inexplicable bliss, of this affair.
    As I continue to romance you, beloveth, again,
    and again, and....again.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release , tyte drop of beauty
    kinda remind me of a piece i once did.
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very good! I still like whoa on the hair washing part.
     
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    Well Rich, as a matter of fact, this piece sort of reminds me of a piece you once did too. And the title of it, is right on the tip of my tongue.... ;) Thank you so much.
    Hair washing can be awfully relaxing Tha Emissary. Thank you brotha for responding so.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very enticing bath, I must say...sounds more like a "heavenly bath" ...that is so enjoyable.
    wonderful piece
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you queent, glad to know you enjoyed this piece sis.
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Romancing

    Oh, such a beautiful poem.
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So happy you think so Poetrymama, much appreciated.
     
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    diggin this vibe...
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you blkangel, nice to know you're digging the vibe of this piece.
     
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