Black Poetry : Romance (For Bishop)

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  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Romance (For Bishop as you requested)

    You put on a slow jam at dinner
    I felt like a sinner
    While the wine was being froze
    You handed me a rose
    And asked me may I please have this dance
    And I'm glad we have this chance
    I smell your fragrance
    And I almost slip into a trance
    You are so good
    And you have put me in the mood
    As you gently kiss my collar bone
    I just want to be with you alone
    I look into your eyes so true
    And listen to you say I love you
    Our lips meet softly but sweet
    Can you feel my heart beat
    Your arms around me tight
    This is such a good night
    As you lay me down
    You gently slip off my gown
    You begin to unclothe slowly
    And sit down beside me
    and I feel so free
    But it's not about sex
    as our lips met
    We're not ready now
    and then you lay down
    You wrapped your arms around me
    Can't you see
    This feels right
    You in my sight
    I love you
    And I know you love me to.
    One_Love
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm

    Well this poem must have sucked not to get any responses. I wrote it because Bishop asked for us to write a poem on a romantic moment. Hmmmm.......
    One_Love
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was tight...Sorry for the late reply, but a lot of things to do...Don't get discouraged..
     
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    one love,

    never doubt your scribes. because so many post during the day sometimes pieces get lost in the mix. personally i like this scribe and the picture it paints.

    this happens of a board as flooded as this one...
     
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