Black Poetry : Rolling With the Flow

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rolling With the Flow

    Keep my hopes stable and like ropes and cables I embrace stuff
    And chase enough girls to be married with childrens, get my life buffed
    Got the power to withstand ,tower and uplift plans like parks and recreation
    Impress on streets and test atletes like the marathon faal out from perspiration
    Vary on the streets time got me shook also carry a complete rhyme book
    Like NAS I’m ILLMATIC hell I’ve had it with static now my mind look
    At the future of hip hop and its dead and buried, unless college rebuild
    Knowledge and skills brng fire to the feast and desire peace and thrill
    At home yall got a phone call “sir come sign this contract over rum
    We talk over the fine facts are you up to this” a lots of true bliss will numb
    The fans” “look if we broom the mistakes the rhyme will bloom great on
    Some strong platinum we’llkl call it another fat one and this won’t take long”
    Have flaws faking a party need lawmaking body call in the legislation
    For devastation let them decide who drink the wine and get accreditation
    From Boonesfarm, as fumes swarm from champaign glasses while looking
    At dames ***** my scripts are rocky like whips used by jockeys so I’m cooking
    Collard greens and hollered mean for some fat back now this mess is soul food
    Bold attitude with a plate of great steak, got quotes strong as structures
    And move around like folks from unknown cultures even the **** vultures
    Fly away, my adventures are whack plus my dentures in contact with my jaw
    Need to see a dentist got a menace on my gums this tooth ache is raw
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Need I say ANYTHING???? I THINK NOT SIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I mentioned this before, but...so when can you read some of these pieces at our Friday night Poetry Slam?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin it too as i roll right in...........
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS ON THIS ONE FOR REAL
     
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    That rhyme is bad & Tight to def! I'm stuck on the first line. I like the upward motion in those word it make you feel the rise. Great Words!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS AND CRITIQUE ON THIS ONE
     
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