Black Poetry : Role Model..My Greatest Insipration

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by YungMiss, Jul 18, 2008.

  1. YungMiss

    YungMiss Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have known you for a very long time
    As far as I can remember
    You know so much about me
    Even that I was supposed to be born in December

    When ever I needed a friend
    You were always there
    No matter the time of day
    You showed me that you care

    It didn’t matter what I was going through
    You always had advice
    And when I thought of doing something stupid
    You made me think twice

    You know things about me
    That I didn’t even know
    And when it comes to choosing what’s best for me
    You decided like a pro

    You never took things for granted
    Even when people took you for granted
    You never did any of the bad things most teens did
    From drinking, doing drugs, sneaking out, to having kids

    You are the true definition of what a role model should be
    And each time I look in the mirror I’m proud of what I see
    Because you make me all that I can be
    I will love you till the end of time, because you are me

    ~YungMiss~
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You deserve the highest of props for recognizing the wonderful young sister that you are. This was an awesome write, and I love your avatar.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i feel your strength

    but don't forget you didn't do it ALL by yourself

    pay homage to those that help pave the way

    even it you just believe it was "GOD"

    peace

    great write

    like i said i'm feeling the power and love here

    and i'm glad i read it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful write here flow on wit ya bad self poetess
     
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