Black Poetry : ROCK THE ATMOSOPHERE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Dec 24, 2010.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ROCK THE ATMOSOPHERE

    Have a raw plan that draw on my command of the English
    Grammar and that give me distinguish glamour to bring this
    Hot and usual like the plot of a musical taking a neater stand
    Like Peter Pan so I’m caught busy like theWalt Disney land
    At home drinking mad juice but a wrong or bad use could
    Send your blood and sugar skyrocketing so its sad in the hood
    To try be energetic when in reality only a diabetic pumping insulin
    Grand into your adrenilin gland very dangerous smoking Winstons
    Lots of jazz I see but as for me except a rap song and slap a dome
    Every niow and then I feel ok, my art is fact and dangerously strong
    Like a heart attack, look when it comes to fame I earned my shot
    Because I learned a lot from a dog, how to obey and sit never stop
    Barking stay legit when outside darken then chase my own tail
    Erase my trail when I creep, my girl don’t have to know my e-mail
    Have plenty of fun with fans but anyone can do work provide they
    Are not a true jerk just a few alert that my kitchen coffee do perk away
    Right now thinking great but drinking make such fool of folks in schools
    With hopes of never becoming an alcoholic drunk in public just fuels
    Ttrouble, like a wicked ticket I allow cats in shows if they have stats
    And flows enough to battle because this stuff will rattle the best so hats
    Off to skills, never panic a clever mechanic give me a wrench and I soars
    And like French doors I open up onto your backyard from your house floors
    Even be haters inside theatres but I’m a creator with much to offer and pours
    Rhymes down microphones and clowns get shown up trying to defeat this
    Because like a piece I fit into puzzles feast face legit struggles keep a list
    Of enemies

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe bruh
     
  3. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich for the props on this one
     
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