Black Poetry : rock stars* (inspired by so'ja) [a rap]

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~*life is laborious, and with that, you are felt.
    --Earl Braggs


    Rock stars
    Without guitars
    On boulevards—
    Hugging visions hard—
    Of life that entraps like—
    Prison bars
    Life entraps some vivid hearts—
    And leaves some vicious scars—
    On peeps that fall short of living large—

    My life ain’t been no crystal glass—
    It’s been cats shot in the head and ***
    And their flesh is ash—
    Mental slaves in this—
    Hunt for cash—
    Clothes and women—
    Posed as venom—with
    Streets corners that are prone to sinning—
    Live wires are the lives we living—
    Hope my God’s forgiving—
    Satan is white and bagged for vending—
    It seems surreal—
    Sometimes i hope my eyes pretending—
    Scared to live—
    Claiming dead since
    My life’s beginning—
    But my strife’s just beginning
    Life cursed my living—

    It seems my whole life’s work is living—
    And so i live...


    (i feel ya so’ja)

    ~fromMItoNYfeelingyapayne~

    espee
    aka
    sean
    aka
    expositori narrativ
    aka
    wurdplai
    aka
    moafiyah
    aka
    vocabuliss
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmmm!!!

    liking how u flowed this one in honor of da SO'JA
    man u slap one down here fo sho!:cool:
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks RICH

    coming from you that is truly an honor.




    sean
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    sean

    you have always been my soldier
    that won't change
    thanks for feeling it
    cause a hood is a hood

    and always remember the number one rule:

    a true street soldier
    never buckles under pressure
    we rise to the occasion
    and make it better

    and i know you upholding that
    cause that covers any and every thing

    loving how you lacing your ****

    DSSNY
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay...

    [SIZE=huge]...so I'm really likin'
    the fact that I'm lovin'
    ya 'wurdplai' constantly;
    :D :D
    [/SIZE]
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to all the people in my listening circumference

    So'ja. 1:heart:
    Maple.long time no type to...what the beat is???
    thanks for eye-blessing my pizzeace.
     
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