Khasm13 : rock da moon...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    full as a glass, will the moonlight last
    till everything is dun, i can't handle da sun
    runnin from this gun, and metrosexual's thas too handsome
    unda a quarter moon i'll slam some
    abstract elements no matta if they are relevant
    or irrelevant...i take new news to the vocabulary settlement
    hotter then a kettle get...i let the petal hit
    the floor cause i got a score to settle with the holders of the lore
    more then a little and less then a lot
    i got blue cheese from the half moon to move past these
    ashy knees and stank subtleties that blow with da leaves
    heaves to da ho whas da reason for da treason
    maybe it's hard just to say no...or to let go
    i don't know...i got this rock in da moon that i want to throw
    at the blind tools that say cash rules and da real rock jewels
    many think they are cool...but in actuality they are fools
    in the highest order...let's make this run for the border
    cause i don't want to loiter...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man, I get what you are saying here Khas....tight drop:)
     
  3. angelicsage

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    While you addressed several issues in this peace...
    This particular stanza...left me speechless
    it gave me the feeling of powerlessness,
    of not having control over time...
    and not having enough of it to resolve,
    complete,or enlighten...as if there is so much
    to be done during a time when so many
    are lost, dissolusioned and blown by
    every wind and doctrine...

    Feeling this peace...
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    khasm...khasm..

    you said "I got blue cheese from the half moon to move past these ashy knees and stank subtleties that blow with da leaves"..
    wow...i don't know what it all means but ashy knees and stank subtleties that blow with the leave...just knocked me down...knocked me down..
    it was image and emotion and intellect absolutely crashing together..
    making me truly see feel the "rock in da moon" and the need to hurl it..
    fabulous...
    fab. U...lous
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What I got from this was the desire, or maybe even the need to delve into the night time galaxy, and delay the light of day and what comes with it for as long as possible. The images you conjure up are always amazing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u took it to a whole nother level here
    and the blazzin flow took me away tyte twisted drop
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my goodness. From the title to the last line, this one is blazin. :flamet: Khasm, I have missed your work, brother. Flow on, flow on.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do your thing pa. I'm truly feeling this one!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you always seem to just blaze
    i love your work!!!!!!!
    flow head on...
    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm,

    Thanks for sharing this drop. Your pieces amaze.
     
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