Black Poetry : Rivers of Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Jan 24, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rivers of love
    Flow out of my mind
    Poetically

    Some say it's an art
    I say it's my heart

    Visually agree
    With what I see

    And what I read
    Comes to life

    Exceeding bounderies

    Loosing my mind
    In this poetic rhyme
    I get it all the time

    You just a dime

    But I don't care
    I know you like it there

    And I wish that you could
    See
    Rivers of love
    Inside of me.

    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    D storm

    da rain of love u pose inside
    ya heart is untouchable.....lovin it..:heart: :kiss:

    stop by and hit my guessbook....:D
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm

    I feel you on this piece sistah friend.... I be having 'rivers of love' flowin' directly from outta my mind & spirit too. Not only that ...I think I be havin' all types of bodies of watuh drainin' from my entire body as I leak poetry from within!


    Great piece.....

    N2
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    desert stormin', gurl...i'm truly lovin' this piece and it's good to see you heyah. keep on scribin'.
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just lovin the vibe in here.
    Thank you .
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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