Black Poetry : RIVER OF LOVE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    RIVER OF LOVE......

    As the blood stream down
    the path of my heart
    i pour out like a river

    as it move through my soul
    i embrace the thoughts
    of our love in mix
    U and I
    we sail the river of love
    beckon by choice
    compassion drips sweeter
    i cover u like a bed of cloth
    as nudity not seen
    my love runs and runs

    flooded by the beauty
    and intently i listen
    we sit face 2 face
    rapidly the beat of drums
    from our hearts in a tune
    my love become more

    like a river of love
    we sail the ocean line
    our boat of love sit a glow
    a flicker from the candle lite
    and the burning moon above
    a flash off yo skin and those eyez
    slowly we kiss lips and a twist
    as i watch u bite your bottom lip
    u taste like honey suckles from
    the garden of purity and it leave me
    ready to undue the love i've held
    far too long
    if only u would have me
    just this once
    i promise ur never want to leave
    and the feelings u will always
    remember
    in the RIVER OF LOVE ))))))))))))>>
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    :kiss: :heart:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this one as well
    you are good nice flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you Mzblkangel
    so kind and humble given love
     
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    Enjoyable visions relayed by this poem bringing light to the senses awakening emotions yet to be unveiled enyoyed it very much very nice flow looking forward to more posts. Signed Tdogg
    Ps. Thanks once again after reading others I'm surprised anyone would reply whole lotta heavy knowledge and talent to learn from.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz your wordz touch me and means so much
    this what we call embracing the bridge of unity
    and feeding as we recieve wisdom & knowledge
    let us continue our journey side by side
    most humble
    $R
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the river of love...where can i get on lol :)
    u make a sista wanna a life pass on ya ride lol :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol ................it's free
    this ride down the river of love
    step by the shorelines and be
    ready to enter the pleasure of
    a heart that rides the waves
    and make ya body crave
    it's free
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are so smooth $$RICH$$! And where can i find a man like you? lol
     
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    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...how many of you are left at home?!...you make a sister wanna drown...where can I dive in?
     
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    playa...playa...


    A-IGHT ladies Lurk tha hustlin type....

    Ya wanna ride down tha river with my manz,thats cool....

    That'll be five dollars each ride...we accept checks,cash, or money orders....
    Kisses can be substituted....lol



    smooth **** $$$RICH$$$.......keep 'em cumming.....oops, i mean coming.....
     
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