Black Poetry : Rituals

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PurpleMoons, May 29, 2003.

  1. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    The day has been long
    my strength almost gone
    its to my satisfaction
    this spontaneous reaction
    it's time to rejuvenate
    I can't hardly wait
    I'll dim the lights
    strip down to my whites
    get the candles a blazing
    its gonna be amazing
    got a warm bath brewing
    with the bath beads stewing
    got the soft music playing
    my body is aching
    it's gonna be a little one on one tonight
    gurrrl! you know I plan to do this right
    must put the lotion by the bed
    a glass of wine for the head
    I'm almost ready
    wait a minute!
    i'm missing my final ingredients
    some sweet potpourri to intoxicate me
    yeah! Now i'm ready
    I slip off my garments
    i'm in total bliss
    I stick out my tongue
    and suddenly i'm in
    I stretch out my legs
    my toes bend to a curl
    I throw back my head
    pure ecstasy my goal
    Awwwwww! thats it
    it feels so pleasing
    theres nothing like a ritual
    of a full blown body cleansing
    Its good for the flesh
    and soothing to the soul
    It's my favorite treat
    I know it's gotta be yours!
    anticipation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    gotta go, its calling me.
    lol!!!
     
  2. Bishop

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    Tight piece purple....Keep the flow coming...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl i love dis here
    u put ya poetic heart into dis
    flow head on sista Queen
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi PurpleMoons, :)

    Wonderful read! Great imagery and flow!
     
  5. PurpleMoons

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    Thanks Bishop! Continuing to flow as it come.

    LOL! with Rich! You know we love a good bath. I had to write about it. LOL!

    Sierra, Anticipation had me waitin. I was in a desiring need!

    THANKS FOR THE READ! I knew somebody would understand.
     
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    onederful you...its good for the flesh and soothing to the soul....indeed...thoroughly enjoyed your ritual flow
     
  7. PurpleMoons

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    Thanks Cypher! I'll race ya! Last one to the tub is a rotton-egg! And thats literally! lol! Just playin around.
     
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    Purple....you are too much.. This was a great piece and I enjoyed reading it....
     
  9. NADIA*BINTA

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    PurpleMoons,

    i like, i like, I LIKE :) ... you paint a beautiful, poetic picture... keep doin ya thang... peace
     
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    nice as always....
     
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