Black Poetry : Risky Business

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Buttercup, Jul 15, 2003.

  1. Buttercup

    Buttercup Member MEMBER

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    i lay with my hands across my boosm
    only to feel the thump of my heart
    like a drum in Africa, it is calling out
    can you hear?
    will you respond
    My heart race as i look into your eyes
    wondering where do we go from here
    feeling fear
    afraid to engage in this thin g
    called a relationship
    is it fair to say
    everyday
    it gets better as time goes by
    but why
    may i ask
    will this last
    when there is no guarentee
    it will always be
    you and i together
    forever
    could this be why my heart race
    at a pace
    that
    cause the sweat to drop
    seemingly
    never to stop
    as my heart flutter
    i began to stutter
    as i try to understand
    but i don't or is it i wont
    i lay my hand across my boosm
    only to feel the thump of my heart
    a rapid beat
    from the heat
    of wanting to risk it all
    just to be with you
    yes, just to be with you
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    beautiful!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff tyte scribing sweetie
    u back wit a bang !!
    loving it
     
  4. Loveall20

    Loveall20 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What can I say......
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    damm, yes it is risky bi ness ..I feel you.....:)
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...this is just beautiful!
     
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