Black Poetry : Rise

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Sep 7, 2003.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I rise
    arms open freely
    reaching as if something is there to capture
    but the only thing I grasp is the concept that we are no more.

    My body slowly turns over
    as if anxious to see another being
    but all that is left is a photo in a frame

    I rise
    with the beautiful sunshine
    and all of mothers natures gifts right at my fingertips
    my heart is now at ease, at the break of a new day
    cause I will never worry about being a new again
    although to rise without you
    is bitter sweet
    But at least
    I now can "rise"
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a mixed emotion of beauty...

    transcribed into artful piece of love poetry...

    and I adored every element........encore!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i really like how this was twisted together
    beautiful scribe
     
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    i enjoyed this alot nice work
     
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    lovely depiction of mixed emotion :)
     
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