Black Poetry : RISE MY PEOPLE

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  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    havent written a poem in a minute so just wanna freestyle

    is black history month
    so i had 2 tell u AGAIN about black zombies
    n the message is that u really can
    the mistery fan
    blowin us everyday in sorrow
    my people always the wrong thing we follow
    we are 2gether as one n 2getha we ride solo
    we have it all no need 2 borrow
    so rise my people
    rise my people
    rise my people we are above evil.

    thank u 4 reading my short poem.
    can i take my bow now?
     
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    by da way inspired by these poems "love dont love me"
    n "if i cant say a word" even da comments is inspirational.

    ONE LOVE.
     
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    Recognizing our strength is an important step in realizing our potential. Good to read you again rapchild.
     
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    u spoke high and loud i here ya we must take it in our grasp
     
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    you can take a bow now!

    That's what I'm talking about! Loved the part where you said, "blowin us everyday in sorrow
    my people always the wrong thing we follow
    we are 2gether as one n 2getha we ride solo
    we have it all no need 2 borrow"

    I like the call, to rise. despite it all we have to rise.
    you make the ancestors proud.

    Trully feeling this!

    Desert Storm
     
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    D.S thank u for lettin me take bow.
     
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    D.S thank u for lettin me take my bow.
     
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    Hi rapchild
    Yes indeed. We all need the encouragement
    to rise and keep moving forward. And yes please
    keep droppping the flows

    Peace~N~Love

     
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    thank you
     
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    Flow on Rapchild
    Above all else is where rise
    Strength within us....
    We Rise with Pride

    Bless :D
    P.s. Ya doing well:D
     
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