Black Poetry : Rip It (RESTRUCTURED REQUEST FROM BROTHERMAN)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Apr 17, 2002.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rip It

    Master forms
    With verbal disaster storms
    Use Powerful tools
    After an hour of full rules reduce
    Words and actually shower fools
    In this learning process
    Progress earning success in this, smoke-burning cess
    Concerning the best
    Lyricist and turning like birds in a nest churning like Sealtest
    Ice cream stress makes sacrifice extreme advice strike and heal mess
    Become an expert at work
    Slap a jerk with raps that perk
    Criticize and destruct Fantasize become abrupt
    Then duck be wise and not corrupt Simonize my truck
    With Kmart car polish goes far to demolish
    Scratches and matches up with Jaguars, surface scars are abolish
    Like Ford explorer desire chrome
    Flip cars like tires from Firestone
    Rhymes rubber like
    Dines right like Danny Glover type
    Lethal weapon on the Microphone
    Evil in ten seconds rip a dome
    Carry weight and roll wild
    Like Secretary of state Colin Powell
    Style with Prime Minister type
    Design sinister hype trap the evil gripe
    Like a cue ball, stew all on the table in the stall and stable
    Call out cats like Gabriel strong being an Archangel able
    To march like a ranger into battle alone
    Home watch and straddle wackiness and roam
    Refrigerates beer and originates clear script yall
    Educates or fear can rip walls,
    Eat crumbs and butter
    While the dumb stutter be in the gutter
    With vicious acts of violence
    Some attacks are never silenced
    On the Six o’clock news,
    Shows how the mix block is ruled then schooled
    By pimps, fools and wimps and this is rude
    Must move the garbage with attempts
    This is no place for Good Year Blimps

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhh Lawd!

    A little remix version hugh!!

    On point bruh!! On point! Fo sho!!:toast:
     
  3. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can't say that i really felt it but yet is has structure to follow...please everybody else, let this be between myself and the artist
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD - Keep reppin'!!!!

    Bra-Man - itzallgravy baby!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  5. Destee

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    Brotherman ... this is a public forum and everything posted here is available for the public to read and comment on if they choose. If you'd like to keep it between you and the artist ... then the two of you should take it private.

    Destee
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why must you insist on telling my HOW to use my space up in here --noone came to me private in their disagreement and the fact remains that i have not broken any rules or directly murdered anyone in my responses (other than the flows --but that's an understanding between me and the artists that practice this artform). I try to keep my cool and say, hey, I know exactly where they're coming from and keep it in rhyme ...but MADD wanted the critiques -he even said he doesn't care how they come...because he's trying to grow in the RAP GAME -not the pretty roses despiction of the beautiful side of poetry where there is always love. There must be balance...you don't want your site to be looked at as being "beu'je" and one sided cause all the real people can bounce. I hate to challenge authority, but you are on the wrong side of right cause me and MADD are vibing like emcee's do. If that isn't the case, then somebody's fronting and I might have to let ya'll be you and me, be me and holla at ' cha. I don't think you understand what it looks like when you single me out and tell me not to use the public forum. Sure don't appear Freedom of Speechish. Now that's about as real as I can put it. Griots love this spot and I only speak for self...holla....
     
  7. Destee

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    Brotherman ... I'm responsible for all the space used in this forum, not just yours. If any of it is being used in a manner that I'm not pleased with ... I'm going to say something about it.

    The 1st thing I said to you, was regarding critiquing (negatively) the work of the poets here ... we are simply not that kind of Family and I explained my position regarding that ... it hasn't and won't change.

    The 2nd time I said something to you, above, is because you asked the Family to allow you and the artist to have a private moment together, here in our public forum ... well, that's not what we're about either. Everyone is welcome (to read, respond, partake) to all that is here ... no less will be implied or accepted ... this is not new nor is it going to change.

    Brotherman, you're relatively new here and I hope you choose to stay, taking a moment to feel how we live. I think you'll find that I (and everyone) am very easy to get along with, reasonable and always looking out for the best interest of the Family, of which you are now a part. If you have a problem with me saying something to you ... then this may not be the place for you ... because I'm going to say something if I think it needs to be said.

    Destee
     
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    in da wake of da moment from flyght i now land under da peace
    which i stand .......rules r follow in best interest of da flow
    which we all love da show ........Brotherman we reply as we do
    showing love to every artist but back lashing will be not ........
    U & MADD is bringing some tyght flow we gotta reply and let ya
    know here on Destee's place ......man take it in stride so we all
    can enjoy da ride .....flying low watching !!!!!
     
  9. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll just hang out and tone it down on my end and enjoy the poets. We'll continue to be happy campers, regardless of my unpopular opinion. Like I said before, this is a tight site to vibe...
     
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    Thanks Brotherman ... for everything.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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