Black Poetry : Rip Game

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  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    leave your mind open
    don't speak about the path i've chosen
    who are you to say that i'm wrong
    i could have been the only sane one all along
    it's not about strong;
    you don't have a choice about staying alive
    but you never knew the difference in tryin to survive
    and if i go the wrong way i'll take my losses
    but where do you think the wisdom drinks among the seers and prophets?
    when i drop this i want it felt
    not reduced to just a word
    and it's the deepest part of you that fears the truth that calls my flowing absurd
    it's what you heard;when that shiver ran through
    when i cold- stopped you
    when i lock and load a lyrical tantrum
    when i all but dropped you
    where was the cynical stare?
    i left you lost but i've been there
    i'm self aware
    and i don't need the world to care
    i don't try at pleasing you until i've done me first
    i swallowed the knowledge down whole and sh*t i'm dyin of thirst
    these books these streets
    unbreakable me
    who are you to criticize when a voice speaks?
    if only GOD can judge me
    then only he can love me
    you have no room in that circle to place yourself above me.
    sometimes i'm lovely
    but never look down upon
    never underestimate the child
    i might be the One
    the spark in the dark that led away from the sharks that twisted the target right until it hit the mark...
    i'm too smart to bark
    just a dogg
    just a soldier
    just a BEAST
    and bein a female don't affect me in the least
    YOU keep the peace
    i'll keep the real and put my life on the page
    bad girls move in silence maybe violence
    i don't need the stage
    i'm in a rage
    twenty cc's to put me back in the cage
    i just burn baby till the candle is out
    it might be love it might be street
    i might philosophize out my mouth
    it's what i'm about
    raw emotions and they gotta come out
    so don't block the pen
    platinum ink fills the well
    and if i seen it if i done it if i know it
    i'mma tell
    i can only face heaven
    we black on earth
    what more could be hell?
    if i can give you directions to the highest of heights
    would you spite me so much
    to go the same way twice?
    you're like the dark hidin things that may not be so nice
    but i'm what throws you back
    GOD's first creation
    baby i AM the light
    Kryptonite
    super but you still just a man
    still just a box
    you'll never see the view i can
    untouchable plan
    blueprints you cant read
    much less understand
    But Hold On...
    and pass the joint
    you already missed the point
    you spit the game that i vomit
    look in the sky for me once in your life like Hayley's comet
    if it's ripped i'm on it
    if you want it i've done it
    if you need it i had it
    if you tried it i won it
    so keep your cardboard in place
    i offered a taste but i can't force the sh*t in your face
    it's all based
    all wrong
    who wins? only the strong
    you stay locked-
    but i'm gone
    i'm like crack
    one hit and your addiction is long
    the pain is gone
    relentless bombs
    Ms.Dynasty- the original femme Donn
    peace-Ms.Dy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    go head let da flava run ya on fire
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont know how to quote you but I'm a do it my way...

    "you'll never see the view i can
    untouchable plan
    blueprints you cant read
    much less understand
    But Hold On...
    and pass the joint
    you already missed the point
    you spit the game that i vomit
    look in the sky for me once in your life like Hayley's comet
    if it's ripped i'm on it
    if you want it i've done it
    if you need it i had it
    if you tried it i won it"

    Girl you are amazing. I felt myself sayin this ish. :bowdown: Someone that's on the same page as me. Lovin your style! Keep it gangsta!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum straight pimpin it like what!
    :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww snap!!! You snapped off up in here!!!! :) I just loved it!!!!!
     
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