Quiet Poetry Lounge : ringing in my head, again

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bert, May 24, 2003.

  1. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It happens every so often
    I'm not going to even pretend
    there's a chord, struck in my soul
    what? over 20 years ago?

    and when it starts to play
    I can't move
    nothing my loved ones
    around me can do for me
    to...soothe

    Just want to lay here
    and remember when
    close my eyes
    hear marvin sing
    and feel your rhythms
    adding
    your moans in perfect harmony
    too...

    brb
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes... we remember, the music that played
    Always... in those golden days

    Nice Bert!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the sound of yesteryears sweet harmony
    great flow
     
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    something about those good old days....just haunts us. This was felt.

    peace

    alyce
     
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    Remembering the Delphonics, temptations,Blue magic. Bert you took me there with this scribe! Now you got me singing( we used to play out in the rain your mother scolded us she said that we were bad) Gota go now and finish this song. thanks..............................
     
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    Hi Bert,

    This one took me back. I love Marvin Gaye. He touched us all. I suppose many us made love while Marvin was playing on the stereo!! Great poem. Thanks for posting it.

    ~Sierra~:)
     
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    so beautiful i had to read it again !
     
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