Quiet Poetry Lounge : RING THINGS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Beautiful_by_me, Jun 3, 2004.

  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ring Things….


    When the sun becomes shy
    And the moon becomes bold…
    When night becomes a single sound
    And silence is all around…
    When you notice the drip drop coming from the kitchens faucet
    And you notice the sound your feet make when they touch the carpet
    When you can actually hear the neighbors phone ring
    And the humming through the walls actually sings.
    When the footsteps begin to quite down above your head,
    And you’ve noticed that you neighbors have settled down for bed.
    When you actually notice the different sounds the cars make as they drive up and down the street…
    And you notice the sounds that your legs make as they brush against the sheets…
    I don’t know if you will ever notice these things….
    But I began to notice them, when I removed my wedding rings.


    Written by: Tia Williams 10/03​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    such a beautiful scribe love how this run cross the page
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi and glad to have you aboard,
    wow...that hit home, that rocked me...wasn't quite looking for the end to end up like that. Wonderful scribing and I felt that one.
     
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    oh wow...
    it's funny how
    you never realize the peace
    you have in something or...
    how much you've missed
    if you were preoccupied
    by it...

    either way...
    this was an amazing piece...
     
  5. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes when it hurts inside...I write it out...

    Thank you all for understanding,
    to read me,
    is to know me...
    and the healing has just begun...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed express release and be healed
    lean on us as we embrace flow on
     
  7. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: HEY...HEY...HEY... :heart:
    :star: :star: :star:
    If only you knew...how many times I use your "back" to hold me up...lol
    Thanks for the renewal of support...
    :star: :star: :star:
    All of you, have become my threads of "Peace"...

    :grouphug:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the closing of a book and reachin within
    for a new meaning wonderful scribe oh such peace
    love this flow....wit a power twist at the end...Angel
     
  9. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "For finding the time to read me...and sign your name"
    PRICELESS​
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smiling...nice flow
    and yes very bold
    feeling the release
    in your poem
    keep flowing
    very nice indeed
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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