Black Poetry : Right Through Me (A Collaboration of Lovers)

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  1. Bria_Chene

    Bria_Chene New Member MEMBER

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    Myself:
    I appear to be
    As a weathered stream
    Putrescent & indelicate
    But yet,
    Your eyes are my wells filter
    Your gaze removes my impurities
    I become translucent
    As you observe my clarity

    You see right through me

    You peruse my emotions
    As I lay like the pages of your favorite book
    You coarse every chapter of my being
    Knowing everything about me
    From my beginning preface to my concluding epilouge
    & all of my climactic occurences in tbetween
    Mainly, you never judge me by my cover
    Always intruiged by what you read
    Even though I remain the same story

    You see right through me

    You know my issues exactly
    From the sound of my silence
    You remain in tune to wavelengths of my stillness
    When I am mute,
    To you, I scream the loudest
    But in my inactivity,
    You still listen
    & your reply never ceases to be
    Exactly what I need

    You know every part of me
    Inside & out
    But still, you accept me
    Your love, consistent; never wavering

    I am a mystery covered in dark sheets
    But Wonderously,

    You See Right Through Me
    But Why?

    My Love:

    The only reason I see
    through is because...
    Well..
    I AM YOU

    I am that dark sheet
    that normal light
    cant shine through

    That gloomy, cold and clammy shell..
    That often times
    I feel as though it
    has no importance
    No significance at all
    Knowing that all I
    need is some encouragement
    Some uplifting words
    to help render my stability

    Thats why I see through you

    I read your book so
    many times that I
    have it memorized
    Every poem, every song
    down to your ad-libs
    Every word and pause
    down to your sighs
    We can write a new epilogue
    together!!

    I see right through you

    I see through the arguments
    and you saying, “bye.”
    Then I say, “ok.”
    When you really want
    me to say, “na, stay” or
    “why do you wanna leave?”
    I see through the silence
    when what you really
    want is for me to break it
    For me to tell you the truth
    Tell you that you are constantly
    riding every thought that my mind
    can muster up

    I see right on through

    Almost as if Im looking
    myself in the mirror
    Looking myself in the eyes
    straight to the soul
    To why I am kinda secluded
    Standing off from others

    I see through you
    But the crazy thing is
    You see right through me too
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Welcome to destee.com poetic playground of peace & respect
    welcome to the community of love and poetic sharing

    This was very well done collabrating on love was divine look to read more of you soon
     
  3. Bria_Chene

    Bria_Chene New Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the love & support RICH
    :qqb018:

    I will definitley have more posted up soon

    I'm looking forward to new friendships & learning experiences

    God Bless!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise as we share poetic thoughts and ventures as we network ad bring
    our artistic showcase to life........Happy you here to share and let da world hear
    your poetic view.

    Much luv & harmony
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this one a wholllle lot.. You take me back to the great collaborations.. Keep postin'.
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You showed here how understanding, attention and acceptance make a strong lovebond. Great write!
     
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