Black Poetry : Right Season, Wrong Song

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Singing a lullaby
    so the babe will sleep
    But the morning song of birds
    resound as daybreak begins to creep
    Right season, wrong song
    Conducting a symphonic majesty
    an aria to enthrall
    But everyone wants to rock out
    cause it's a head bangers ball
    Right season, wrong song
    Dozy-do your partner,
    swing your lady round and round
    while the cats just want a cool breeze,
    atmosphere, and a mellow sound
    Right season, wrong song
    A romantic duet, a love ballad,
    sung in two part harmony
    A change of venue, calls for
    a soloist, singing a blues melody
    Right season, wrong song
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    right season,
    right reason.
    wrong song,
    you wrong.
    cuz the songs you put,
    are just right.
    keep scribin' and flowin',
    and if we're wrong--------then you know you right....... :angel1:
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...

    Girl...could you get any deeper on me...

    I'm down there with you but...I'm speechless

    just trying to take it all in...seems I've been at the Headbanger's Ball...

    but my reservations were somewhere else too...


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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Watz......

    You always know how to bring it! :jumping:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this scribe...flow on poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wrong song in da right season ...wow!
    u took me their in the tune very deep scribe
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I can feel those seasons that don't go with my song...did I say that right?, let me try that again...I can always feel the songs...but the seasons never right. :) ...
    this is a very nice piece...surely your hands has been busy.
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lilcherry76, thanks for letting me know I got it right, appreciate it.
    Thank you sage, I guess I could get deeper, but....You're writing some deep scribes yourself, you humble me with your praise.
    jazzymoonchild, thanks so much poet of the week for your kind words.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel, thank you much for your support on this.
    Thanks for letting me know I took you there, Rich. Your scribes are pretty deep lately as well.
    queentswana, lol, right season, wrong song...I was going to say it the other way around, but that would have made it much too easy. Thanks for your support on this piece.
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very cool Watz. I like the feel of that poem. Your skillz make me so jealous that I want to :cry:

    Much Love Watz. Thanks for sharing.
     
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