Black Poetry : Right Now I'm Crying...I Could Be Dying...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right now I’m cryin’
    For reasons I can’t even explain
    Maybe its because I’m slowly dyin’
    And there is nothing to gain
    I’m not sure if this theory is true
    Because the tests haven’t comeback
    But still I am sittin’ here utterly blue
    And every one seems out of contact

    I’m sick
    So very sick
    But nobody knows my pain
    The stress is thick
    So very thick
    That my days are filled with rain
    My body is goin’ downhill
    But no one knows but me
    And I still have dreams to fulfill
    Ever so faithfully

    Just received news about my best friend
    and her mother and father have died
    so how can I tell my best friend?
    that I may not even survive

    my man is away on a trip
    and his phone is disconnected
    theres no way we can talk from a distance
    and he doesn’t know that I could be insurrected

    so right now I’m cryin’
    fiercely cryin’
    cuz doctors believe I’m slowly dyin’
    but I believe that my God is with me
    from now until he stops my cryin’…

    …or witnesses my heavenly dyin’..
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man... im sorry girl. ur in my prayers and i hope all goes well for u. much love babygirl...
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my prayers are with you, Lovely
    wishing you health and happiness
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much poetically and skrybe...that means alot to me...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unto u my heart reach out to touch ya soul in comfort
    in my prayersssssssssssssssss! sistah may da blessing be
    with u
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SISTAH, you are in my prays and just remember that GOD has all things in his hands and everything is possible...GOD won't put much on your plate u cant bare...stay in pray and fast...only to cry is to make your soul strong...GOD BLESS SISTAH:)
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot rich and badux.......i'm about to start cryin' again... lol
     
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    Sending love to ya sista....:love:

    cry let it all out....:cry:

    be strong

    much love libertylaida
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovelygoldenone, do not despair, God is with you, and you have all of our sincere prayers!
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much both of you!!
     
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