Black Poetry : Riding (Writing) On My Blank (Inspired by Sherykah)

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm riding on my blank
    shotgun
    front seat
    windows down
    pen in hand
    journal on bended knees
    drawing free
    lines that
    see concepts
    freeing myself
    from green
    walls and
    purple floors
    writing about
    the things
    that are meaningful
    to me
    as a poet
    I have so many
    crazy visions
    that collide
    together
    crash
    test dummy
    words
    that alter my
    reality
    should I pay attention
    to being careful
    care full ly
    if only even
    momentarily
    it's like
    adding liquid to
    a forest and
    smelling
    wood sweating smoke
    inside the
    timpani of last night's
    under-cooked
    moon
    that lit the
    highway from underneath
    or maybe on this road
    i was
    hearing a child's
    cry sounding
    louder than
    crickets
    croaking
    and frogs
    choking
    on bugs they've
    swallowed
    or maybe on this road
    i was
    seeing blood apples
    growing
    in suffocated air
    and
    wanting
    Eve to let
    Adam
    stick his tongue
    into the center
    of her sex
    and for the first
    time taste
    chocolate milk...

    I'm riding on my blank
    shotgun
    front seat
    windows down
    pen in hand
    journal on bended knees
    drawing free lines
    that see concepts
    freeing myself
    from me



    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rykah

    :lol: :lol: **** sistah :lol: :lol:

    You got me ova heah dyin' laughin'... (Nestle Quik) :lol:

    Well, if I were the one to write the Old Testament (or any other poet) could you just imagine the craziness we'd be adding in there from a poet's perspective!! :D

    :lol:

    Thanks for the mid-day inspiration sistah friend!!

    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess that's what they get from worryin' about dem **** apples!! LMAO :lol:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: Big balla ...... shot calla .... :lol: Noah wit a houseboat!! :lol:

    Nestle Quick instead of Crystale!! :lol: Gurl you sumpin' else!

    N2
     
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    THIS IZ

    can you say...

    fabulous?

    you mind disjoints at times I see (that's a good thing)

    your pen is mighty...***** a sword (excuse the profanity)

    blak
     
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    N2 ya on point and str8 off da hook wit dis one
    it's like a bang!!@ my head
     
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    I really liked this
    the repartee
    between
    you/sherekak
    had me rollin
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak ~

    Now I told you when I saw you the otha day that my mind is becoming like a good game of scrupples or scategory! :lol: Yes, I do suffer from cerebral disjointation from time to time :lol:
    Just don't have me committed! :D

    Thanks for the read dear one!

    N2 :)

    :heart:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you dearest! I'm glad you enjoyed!

    N2 :)
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you could flow within
    the laughter here~~!!

    N2 :lol:
     
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