Black Poetry : RIDE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CarrieMonet, Sep 16, 2004.

  1. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sin softly with me,
    Gently kissing, sweet soft touches.
    Sin harder with me,
    Gently wrestling from your clutches.
    Move more with me,
    Rocking in and out so quick.
    Thrust hard into me,
    Making the air around us thick.
    Push deep into me,
    Make me know I'm all yours.
    Push hard into me,
    let me get on all fours.
    I can handle you,
    Don't stop yet I'm not done.
    Keep telling me what to do,
    I'm here to make this fun.
    I'm ready to cum,
    Make me scream out your name.
    You're cumming too,
    I know you feel the same.
    Final thrust in me,
    Screams and heaving breaths aside.
    This was wonderful.
    Thank you for the ride!
     
  2. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ouch.....thank you. Very nice Carrie. Man, I can see it now :x: Making me daydream here at work girl.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no thank u .......love dis ride u scribe
    all most made me get loose lady !!!
    tyte hot drop
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl....that's hot
    time for dat cold shower rite about now
     
  5. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you!!
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    carriemonet
    you are wonderfully centered in your poetic sexuality..
    not only in this fab flow but in haiku too..
    it definitely makes me smile....
     
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    And what a spicy ride it was. Flow on poet.
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    sin softly

    Sin softly with me,
    Gently kissing, sweet soft touches.
    Sin harder with me,
    Gently wrestling from your clutches.

    I share with you the following, written a few years ago, that was inspired by the depth of passion and lust your poem/words/thoughts take me to.
    a poem

    Ah, sweet mystery!
    That blooms and bursts
    Upon the set with no decree;
    How cold is your touch
    How sweet your flow
    As you curse my veins.
    Yet there is your ruthless truth,
    Which spares no one,
    No matter the strength of spirit,
    and challenges the sincerest heart
    with the taste of Love’s addiction.

    82/mcc​
     
  9. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Old Soul,
    That was really nice, thank you for sharing.

    Deepy,Thanks for the compliment!!
     
  10. caramelpython

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    :grin: I loved the passion of this flow! :uzi:
     
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