Black Poetry : RIDE with me Baby

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Sep 6, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A man can forgive.
    He can easily forget the things
    that mean the most.

    Our minds are speeding at
    a thousand miles a minute
    analyzing the turf.

    The streets we walk.
    The things that took
    place at work.

    At home

    and in the streets.

    But when he returns
    the love that he burned
    can't be recovered.
    He finds he created grief.

    Not on purpose.

    Not cause he meant.

    To close off the world and decide.

    What his next move was.
    His next hustle.
    His next move to garner
    his pride.

    He has to swallow so
    much each day.
    He faces the right
    and the wrong.

    He needs you his lady.
    To be there for him.
    When he returns.
    From this.

    Night marish ride.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this as well
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bring it just like dat !
    HODEE dis was tyte
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked this piece HODEE
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is tight and oh so true. We forget some times, the struggle of our men. But we love them so much...there are a lot of us who are still down for the ride
     
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