Khasm13 : ride on this love tonite....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    take this hand extended...
    tonite i'll hold your heart and mend it
    on this stellar journey bended
    around the two moons our love swoons
    my...starships circles and plunges in...to make sure they are defended
    my...head rides wide and in your atmosphere we are completely blended
    my...full and devote attention you are tendered
    on this epic excursion nothing will be a diversion
    and keep us from merging aint no stoppin my surging
    flying on top of the birds and the bees
    you need to be so free
    i need to be so free
    we need to be so free
    internally and externally
    mentally and physically
    simply...you tempt me with fruits or wordly beauty
    your essence soothes me and cools me
    off...when the sun burns to hot in one spot
    you got what other women have not
    the creme always rises to the top
    you and only you is what i opt(for)
    so lets take this ride
    on tonite's sensual star shot....
     
  2. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother Khasm, this just made me float. Lovely
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done brutha Khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with jazzy, I felt like I was floating on a feather. Such sweet natural images...just lovely.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey now...you took me for a ride..nicely done
     
  6. angelicsage

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    Khasaclysmic…:sand:
    This is my new poetic measure
    To which I will determine if
    A poem is worthy of the alter
    Thus far…I’ve yet to find
    One that compares to the
    Khasmatic Rhythm…

    ...did I mention how intoxicating this flow was :spinstar:
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're so cute....I loved this. Real nice.
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    okay khasm...
    i love seeing this side
    this love/warm gentle flowing side
    definitely sensual beats/tempos/pulses..
    rippling and surging..
    i like...
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a wonderful flow...a deep flow
    but you've always been a deep brother. loved this piece...thanks
     
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